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Poem Contest Theme: Beauty of Nature
Submit  poems about mountains, seas, gardens, forests, jungles, deserts, seasons,  etc.
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5 is Excellent!
Date of Submission: Jan 1 , 2006
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Deer 

Early that morning
my father saw deer,
a doe, buck and fawn
cornered in his headlights.

They fled--
and I thought
they are living here secretly
twisting their necks
in the vines in our yard,
nibbling at the lilies.

We thought instead
the flowers were dying,
but find this new life
being nurtured
beyond our back doorstep,
divided prints on the trail.

Deer--
swimming across  Long Island Sound
from Connecticut
to the Island,
fragile, needy, beautiful
down to the whiteness
marking the center of their heads.

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  Note: This is to certify that the poem I am submitting is original and  my own work.

First Name:
Linda
Last Name:
Benninghoff

Editor's Rating: 4  laurels out of 5 laurels
Reader's Rating: (not yet rated)
4 is Very Good!
3 is Satisfactory!
2 is Lacks Depth
1 is Never Mind
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