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Winter 2006
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THE LAST TIME   

by Charles P. Ries
Source:
The Last Time, (2005)  p.31

  I was thinking about the last time
  I was in love. When I realized she
  was thinking the same things at the
same time as I was. The constant
  erection, forgetfulness and tears.
  Everywhere was a bed. Everyday our
  hearts bled into buckets big enough
  to wet the thirst of 1,000 red roses.   

  Do you suppose love - true love - parts
  the curtain and allows angels and night visitors
  to circle this light? A light that smells like cinnamon
  and sounds like children's whispers.
  We had only to breathe the same air to believe it.    

  Seven months later she returned to her husband and
  the sad chains. Love hasn't shown up since, except
  when I find her in the features of people I see.
  This nose,  those eyes, that chin. They remind me of
  the last time I was in love.   
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    Poet's Inspiration  Behind The Poem "The Last Time":
I am a great lover of the late Albert Huffstickler and his poetry. I was driving in my car thinking I wanted to write a Huff poem. So many Huffstickler poems have this heightened reflectiveness about them. A few days earlier I was in a check out line and saw a woman who had the exact same nose as a woman I was deeply in love with. It struck me as interesting that just one small physical feature of another person can take a mind back to memories of The Last Time.   
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